Monu Tamang’s Chronicle
of a Love Foretold published in December, 2015 is a young adult fiction based in
Raichur, Karnataka, India.
It’s the story
of the Bhutanese students in India, their initial struggle to blend in with the
locals in the south and how they unite as one when necessary. The book is slim and an easy
read but packed with themes of love, loss, betrayal, forgiveness and
uncertainty of life.
It definitely takes you back to your college days when life
was all about experimenting and trying to fit in and discovering yourself in
that process, making you a better person or worse for that matter. It makes you
yearn for your younger days when you were experiencing love for the first time
ever, in your life.
Kinga Lhendup is
a young Physiotherapist at Paro hospital. At the outset, he leads a dreamy
life; working at the hospital during the day, reading and writing at night or
drinking whiskey. And jogging in the morning or tending to his beautiful flower
garden. It’s a completely fulfilling life. Yet, deep inside, he is a broken man.
Sleeping pills are the only antidote to his insomniac nights.
Monu takes us to the college days where we discover that a guy and a girl meets, likes each other
and falls in love but…but there is a third person. Somebody who loves the girl
and that’s when the matters get complex and also that’s when the charm unfolds.
Kinga Lhendup is
on a scholarship to study Physiotherapy in a college in India. As a young
Bhutanese, fresh out of high school, he has a whole life laid before him like a
map to explore. Starting from experimenting to drink and smoke, flirting with
girls and playing pranks on his lecturers, Kinga is out on an adventurous
roller-coaster life. Until he meets Namsa Lhazin, the girl who sweeps him off
his feet.
The book sends a strong social message of the difficulties faced by a child born out of wedlock
and how that impacts the mindset of the child as he/she grows up. It also gives an
insight into the life of a medical student. In that process, we also learn
something about the medical terminologies which helps you understand how
important your health is.
Monu has emerged
a contemporary writer and has definitely paved a way for other inspiring
writers. He makes you feel ‘hey I can also write a book,’ which is so
inspiring! If you have a story to tell, write it. It’s as simple as that.
It’s astounding
that 30 copies of this book sold in two straight days soon after its publication at DSB Enterprise, a
local bookstore in Thimphu. And word has it that he already ran out of his
first printed copies. Such a huge feat in itself.
While the story
is light and can be completed in two sitting, there are certain disappointments.
For one, it lacks character development. We never know how beautiful Namsa
Lhazin is or how good looking Kinga Lhendup is? Beautiful and handsome as to
how? The reader cannot imagine the eyes and the nose of the characters. Thus,
giving a full stop to the reader’s imagination of the characters. I couldn’t
bring myself to fall in love with the characters, no matter how hard I tried.
When
Namsa is first introduced, she is wearing a black shrug and a frock. What a
combo! The writer definitely lacks sense of fashion. A shrug is a cropped, cardigan-like garment with short or long sleeves, worn over a vest or tank top or over a dress. Isolating shrug as a piece of cloth stops the
reader from further imagination of Namsa. It doesn’t make you feel invested in the
life of the characters, which is so critical in a story.
A light
influence of Haruki Muarkami is distinct in the book. The love making scene
when its pouring heavy outside is one that is replicated from Murakami’s
Norwegain Wood, I reckon.
Gaurapa’s road to recovery is something which we can resonate from the film Munna Bhai MBBS. These are a few examples of an
influence from the books and film which I felt had the author influenced, which
of course is very natural and forgiving.
However, it saddens me that
the story doesn’t live with you, long after finishing it and doesn't make you think about it for days on end. After finishing the book, it doesn’t make you
hug it because it stops you from investing in the book emotionally.
Nonetheless, this is a good start. Monu definitely left me craving for more of such stories. Stories which are distinct in Bhutanese and close to our hearts, stories which would make us hug the book at the end. We look forward to
reading more of your stories. Way to go Monu!
And yes, the design and cover layout is of international standard. Its just so convenient and perfect for a light travel read.
P.S : I apologise for the honest and brutal review which is done in good faith of course as an ardent reader and a well wisher. I hope the author will take it positively and come better like a phoenix rising from the ash in his next project.







